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Date: 11/5/1999 8:53:00 AM
needs to be a bit more scary to have the reader sit on the edge of his/ her seat. Good job though!!!!!! |
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Date: 12/30/1999 10:37:00 AM
It was a little interesting. I believe he saw what he said he saw - but, wasn't there anymore to it than what he wrote? Or was it just a short sighting? |
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Date: 1/3/2000 6:01:00 PM
I live in Kentucky. And I see more paranormal activity
in my bedroom than what this man saw in the night,
on the river bank. If you want a good story, you should talk to me.
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Date: 1/24/2000 10:09:00 AM
to me you could of pote more info about it. Not only that but you need to poot more feeling in to it. |
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Date: 8/23/2000 1:50:00 PM
Spelling counts!! |
Date: 9/28/2000 4:15:00 PM
From Authorid: 12876
this is good,i can imagine it being a bit scary  |
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Date: 10/22/2000 8:52:00 AM
It should've told where, when, and how it changed their life. I didn't like the lack of description. |
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Date: 12/23/2000 5:28:00 PM
This is very.............fake sounding. It lacks good description and isn't scary. No suspense or anything like that. And if you want your story to be good, then that's what you need. |
Date: 1/9/2002 2:11:00 AM
From Authorid: 35160
creepy  |
