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Ghost Story II...........kronk

  Author:  21435  Category:(Fiction) Created:(6/23/2001 7:58:00 PM)
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....13, 14, 15, switch sides. I swung the paddle over to my left side, and began pulling again. 1, 2, 3,....Dig, pull, angle away. The bow of the canoe started to go to the right ever so slightly, than straightend up and eased to the left just a tad. "Feathering" the paddle, as my father would say, was the key. His voice still sounded in my head. Deep, heavily accented, no nonsense, " I pull 15 times to right, then 15 to left. I never change unless something goes "bad wrong." He continued, "15 times is not "chisled in stone." Whatever works for you, could be 6 or even 3 each side."

Of course, being 12 years old at the time and completely "in awe" of my Dad, I chose to use 15 per side also.

The head wind caught the bow of my canoe, and moved it sideways. I quickly checked the movement and resumed my course. He was still in my head. "Make that boat go where you want it to go. Make every stroke count for something. Pull and guide the boat, with the same paddle stroke." I flashed back to summer, two years ago. My father had handed me the paddle. "Now boy, go back to the dock." I pulled over and over, with all my strenght, and only succeeded in going around in circles.

He didn't let me suffer very long. Taking the paddle, he said, "Now watch me closely." The canoe straightened right up and headed straight for the dock, as if by magic. "Son," he began, "All the power in the world won't do you any good, unless you know how to use it."

I watched his every move when we were on the river. Gradually, I picked up the technique and became a fair hand. My father was poetry in motion, afloat, a " real" waterman. Proficient even, until his death, at 88 years.

Making good time against the slight wind and sluggish current, I was soon closing in on the "haunted shore." As I rounded a sharp bend in the river, the tall, pale figures came into view. Begining 75 feet from the main water course, they stood perfectly still, glowing faintly by the light of the sickle moon. Row after row of the ghostly regiment extended up the sloping riverbank and faded away over the rise.

I continued paddling up-river, careful to remain in the center of the channel, until I reached the far left flank of the column. I stopped paddling then, and allowed the current to move me backwards. Narrowing my eyes, I turned to face the ranks of the white army. They appeared to move slowly and follow my progress downstream. I became oblivious to everything else, concentrating only on the weird scene before me.

On the very fringes of my consciousness, barely perceptable, very faint, I could hear a soft voice calling. "Stop, where are you going? Come back. Comeback. Stop..Come...back......"

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Date: 6/23/2001 8:03:00 PM  From Authorid: 28130    wow great job i cnt wait till the next one without_love  
Date: 6/23/2001 8:41:00 PM  From Authorid: 3642    This was a Very good Kronk --Your a excellent writer I Hope You continue and You try for Publication ----It is excellent work ----have You ever Heard of The writers market ---Its a book with all the publishers In It and it tells what They pay and what they want. You can find It at The library Hugs to You and Good luck :o)  
Date: 6/24/2001 3:48:00 AM  From Authorid: 7341    Kronk...you'd better finish this one!!!!! lol...I'm gonna give ya a little kick in the pants one of these times for leaving me hanging like you do!!! Great job on this one...you know you've got MY attention!!!  
Date: 6/25/2001 5:51:00 PM  From Authorid: 28363    Yes, Yes, these are stories I was looking for when I came upon unsolved mysteries. Merci' Beau Cue. <donno>  
Date: 6/27/2001 3:44:00 PM  From Authorid: 4548    delicious! kronk, wonderful writing, so fluid and thorough. you always leave me wanting more.  
Date: 7/15/2001 2:24:00 PM  From Authorid: 29534    you are so talented:), don't keep me hanging to long lol (((hugs)))  
Date: 8/8/2001 2:48:00 PM  From Authorid: 14780    :) wowsers..on to the next! lots of love  
Date: 8/10/2001 3:27:00 AM  From Authorid: 26975    Kronk, I'd seriously say get out there and try to get published!  
Date: 8/10/2001 11:45:00 AM  From Authorid: 18506    kronk, you did it again ole buddy! when i woke up this morn, your writing was one of the first things i thought about and i just had to get a little more of the 'fix.' love,  
Date: 8/13/2001 7:26:00 AM  From Authorid: 37038    i love the all the detail this igetting scarry i love it!!:),,,alicechains1  
Date: 8/28/2001 7:46:00 AM  From Authorid: 36024    I hope all usmer's get a chance to grab a cup, sit down and enjoy this :) misty bay

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