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Date: 4/2/2002 8:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 52462
ok.... |
Date: 4/2/2002 8:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 50530
Good story,but I don't like the ending,why did he have to die,why?  |
Date: 4/2/2002 8:12:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 47699
Thank you for the words of appreciation, 50530 but you must understand that death is a part of the living process. We start dying the minute we are born. It's sad but it's true. It's what we call "life."  |
Date: 4/2/2002 8:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 10534
52462, It's called a story. And a pretty dang good one at that! keep writing Frankenstein :)  |
Date: 4/2/2002 8:16:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 47699
Thanks tons, Icy Fire! You know what's going on! :)  |
Date: 4/2/2002 8:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 50530
You have depresed me Frankenstein,now................ I don't want to live.Wahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....if you don't know I am crying.  |
Date: 4/2/2002 8:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 20956
Where do you come up with your ideas Frankenstein?? You never cease to intrigue me with your stories and then *bang* surprise me at the end. Nice work :) ....  |
Date: 4/2/2002 8:22:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 47699
Thank you so much, Sun Angel! I hope I never, ever let you down! :)  |
Date: 4/2/2002 8:51:00 PM
From Authorid: 12341
Quite a good story line, I bet many died like that in those days, always the victor until the that realization sank in, just a side comment, this story brought back a true story I think you may appreciate, my great-great grandpa was born in 1896, not so long ago but when you grow up out in the hills without mother or father, civilization can be far away, later when he married my granny they had three girls, the oldest my grandmother, a neighbor who lived up in a "hollar" somewhere near exposed himself to the girls and had other intentions as well, they got away, and there being no phones or law for miles around, anger got the best of grandpa, he took his gun and went looking for the guy, he did shoot him but luckily the guy didn't die, when the sheriff came looking for Grandpa he was already in the hills and there he stayed for awhile until the "heat was off". He was never brought to court or served any time, the sheriff as well as others said they most lokely would have done the same thing, later he met up with the guy "in town" who apologized and said he knew he was wrong and certainly deserved to be shot. Quite a perspective they had back then, my grandpa slept with a gun under his pillow till he died at 96. Never paid to trust anyone to much, he would always say, luckily we had enough sense to never mess with his guns.  |
Date: 4/2/2002 8:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 12341
*most likely*  |
Date: 4/2/2002 9:02:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 47699
I do appreciate that annecdote, Shadow Ghost and I thank you for it. I found it to be quite interesting. By the way, I'm pleased that you enjoyed the little story! 8D  |
Date: 4/2/2002 9:05:00 PM
From Authorid: 51979
Another great story from the mind of Franky. BTW 50530 he died because he was shot...and he didn't kill the other guy first. The only BAD TERRIBLE REALLY SAD part of this story is that it ended!-VitalDeath  |
Date: 4/2/2002 9:07:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 47699
VitalDeath, that is the very best compliment I've had all day and I surely do thank you for it! :)  |
Date: 4/2/2002 10:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 49354
Good story 47699! Sad, but it is a part of life. Wonderfully written!  |
Date: 4/3/2002 5:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 28946
Frank, this was awesome! I am so glad you have this wonderful talent cause you do know how to keep us entertained! I always wondered myself what the grave residents think of the world above them and if the changes are to their likings. Thanks Frank!  |
Date: 4/3/2002 5:37:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 47699
You're most welcome, Penny! I'm pleased that you enjoyed the little read!  |
Date: 4/6/2002 1:37:00 AM
From Authorid: 6731
A wonderfully sad story (that made no sence, but it is nearly four in the morning here) I liked it :)  |
Date: 5/2/2002 8:25:00 PM
From Authorid: 51292
Wow this is a bit different!! I loved it!! It was sad but that was just the way of life!! It was soo detailed and written wonderfully!! You did such a great job on this story!! Its like this really happend to you!! VERY CREATIVE!! Lefty11  |