Detain...-ERHIT   Author:  49910  Category:(Poetry) Created:(6/27/2002 11:10:00 PM) This post has been Viewed (196 times) Every thing seemed to detain me Like a prison caturing my pain It seemed even the blind eyes could see How this destitute is still living I had to start over every day It didn't matter how close the finish line was Waiting until the shot gun fired its last round To only take another step into the wrong direction This utter loss of hope, despair can't be the way My desperation is killing my faith, it took it all away Then I felt your breath on my cold face Before I realized it, every thing was replaced Every thing seemed to detain me Like a prison capturing my pain It seemed even the blind eyes could see How this destitute is still living Ever since I found you every thing changed Suddenly the pasts pain is the least of my worries As I lay close to you and listen to you breathe Knowing in my heart this time I don't have to wake up...it's reality You can join Unsolved Mysteries and post your own mysteries or interesting stories for the world to read and respond to Click here Scroll all the way down to read replies. Show all stories by   Author:  49910 ( Click here ) Spring is coming