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Date: 8/12/2002 10:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 59151
good post. keep up the good work...taurus3e  |
Date: 8/12/2002 11:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 13897
*cries* i really dont read much poetry here... but i was drawn to this one. the rhyming was a bit shakey, i think it could be more powerful if you just used that last rhyme for the ending two lines... just a little bit of advice. but this was a great poem, and i can sincerely relate to it. thank you.  |
Date: 8/12/2002 11:51:00 PM
From Authorid: 54155
wow what a good poem, keep your writing up!! if you wanna read some of my poems check em out you don't have to reply... your poem is very moving :D  |
Date: 8/17/2002 1:38:00 AM
From Authorid: 46795
another good one Dustyn..Hidden meaning in this one:)  |
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52679 Category:(Poetry) Created:(8/12/2002 10:17:00 PM)