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Date: 9/7/2002 7:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 49563
I like it. It seems to have a quick pace to it- I like that as well. Nice poem -Kitts |
Date: 9/7/2002 8:35:00 PM
From Authorid: 28363
Breathtaking as always...  |
Date: 9/7/2002 9:38:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
I hear ya! Great expression of deep depression...sorry...I have a problem with rhyming...sometimes, i can't stop ;)~SpaceCase  |
Date: 9/8/2002 6:27:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thanks Kitts  |
Date: 9/8/2002 6:27:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thankies Donno...I can give you mouth to mouth???  |
Date: 9/8/2002 6:28:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
LOL@spacecase...I do that sometimes too! Thanks for reading  |
Date: 9/8/2002 2:05:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
aaarrrr, the cage...*rattles tin cup along bars* great poem NKA,  |
Date: 9/8/2002 4:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Been there a few times myself, NKA. I feel trapped just knowing that I can't leave when I want to. Work...gotta bear it. Thanks for the read, my friend...Write on....  |
Date: 9/9/2002 8:00:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
thanks Hack...at least I don't feel alone now:-)  |
Date: 9/9/2002 8:21:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Kronk, ya know..working from my house is not all it is cracked up to be...great insight!  |