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| Date: 10/9/1999 6:55:00 PM NOT MUCH OF A STORY = JENNIFER NEBUDA= 9 YEARS OLD |
| Date: 10/9/1999 7:33:00 PM this is NOT a story.It needs a title and more WORDS.I suggest you try again.AND if the above is really 9.........I give you credit for writing.And only if.OK. |
| Date: 11/18/1999 9:55:00 AM From Authorid: 1206 This story is just fine for a first attempt....T. |
| Date: 11/18/1999 10:19:00 AM This wasn't even a paragraph. I saw no periods, commas, nothing. You can do better than this.It needs awhole lot more more detail. Your trying to get the reader interested in reading your story, thats the whole idea about writing one.And I know you can think of a title, C'mon how hard could it be. Title it " Grand Pa's Ghost". Something is better then nothing.. |
Date: 10/18/2000 5:44:00 PM
From Authorid: 2011
He's probablly letting you know he is still with you.  |
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