~~Repost~~ Need more opinions

I posted this before but I need more opinions..These are song lyrics..And I'm adding some lyrics I just now wrote also..It's short

Only 17 she’s broken so many hearts
Choosing her victims carefully
Using herself as the bait
Only this time was different
She didn’t know she would be the one trying to escape

She fell in love
Everything has changed
She’s the one praying now
That he’d feel the same
Nothing could stop this
No matter how hard she tried
She had brought so many men to tears before
But look whose crying now

Thinking to herself
She said love is wonderful thing
But then there was the pain
Knowing she couldn’t get him to love her back
Knowing that she just got played

She fell in love
Everything has changed
She’s the one praying now
That he’d feel the same
Nothing could stop this
No matter how hard she tried
She had brought so many men to tears before
But look whose crying now

Shes trying to understand how
How could she have been so blind?
As a guilty feeling overcame her
She just laid her head down and sighed

Because shes been in love
Nothings is going to be the same
She’s the one that got burned this time
Hoping that he felt the same
Nothing could have stopped this
She didn’t even want to try
After all those men she brought to tears before
She’s the one crying this time





And this one...


We talk for hours
About things no one could explain
Even though I can’t feel your touch
You give me that same rush
When you look at me
It feels as though I’ve been set free
Free from all the worry’s life can bring

Let’s take it up a step
Confess our love for one another
For me there could be no other
I’ve never felt so alive
Until the day I looked into your eyes

Nothing has to change
Besides the fact that I’ll be holding your hand
If you turn me down I’ll lose my sanity
Don’t tell me I’ll never be more then a friend
Please don’t ban me from your life
If you don’t agree

Let’s take it up a step
Confess our love for one another
For me there could be no other
I’ve never felt so alive
Until the day I looked into your eyes

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