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Mommy's smoking,,,,,,,,,JAak

  Author:  42703  Category:(Poetry) Created:(11/25/2002 8:26:00 PM)
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Mommy is killing me-
with her smoking,
I thought i ment more to her,
but she's still puffing on her cigarette,
she doesn't want the best for me,
my little lungs are choking on tar,
i never had a chance to grow as far as i could've gone,
that nicotine is drowning me in a haze of birth disease,
can't she hear me crying?
Her habit has got me too-
only if she could see my face,
her husband's eyes are mine-
but i've got her lips,
she'll never see me beautiful,
as she takes another puff for me,
even the doctor told her not to smoke any more,
she didn't help her self to be free from the bad habit of smoking,
now here i am-weak and wrinkled,
my breathing is heavy..just like my mom,,who doesn't care about me,
after i enter this world she will see all the bad things she's done to me,
could've been healthy-don't know even if i'll live,
if i could only warn the rest of moms not to smoke if their going to have a kid,
then maybe every baby would be healthy and not get messed up like i did,,
mommy-i love you,,,this isn't fair,
you've killed me before my first breath of air.

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Date: 11/25/2002 9:00:00 PM  From Authorid: 61941    very good poem, thanks for sharing..#1devildog  
Date: 11/25/2002 9:07:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    thanks for your comment.  
Date: 11/25/2002 9:19:00 PM  From Authorid: 49546    Nice Poem I can relate!  
Date: 11/25/2002 9:22:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks LPF for your comments.  
Date: 11/25/2002 9:27:00 PM  From Authorid: 42792    Wow...very impacting and true. I quit smoking each time I was pregnant. I smoke now but not around the kids. You are right...and this is sad:(  
Date: 11/25/2002 11:11:00 PM  From Authorid: 28125    What a sad poem...gets ya right there you know...that is so cruel....emotional but great expressions...I hope this isn't a personal poem...that is just too heartless...Love ya Lots...Hugs and Kisses...ICL~*~*~*~YOur GIrl~*~*~*~  
Date: 11/26/2002 4:11:00 AM  From Authorid: 23886    Awww! Thats so sad! Your talented..Keep it up! And keep posting..thanx for sharing, good job, take care,  
Date: 11/26/2002 5:43:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks SIs for your comments!  
Date: 11/26/2002 5:47:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks my girl for your comments,,yes this is kinda a personal poem,,i seen a girl at work smoking and she's pregnant..i couldn't believe that she would still smoke..which is really sad! ANyway thanks again,Love ya lots,Hugs and Kisses from me to you always~YOur Guy~*  
Date: 11/26/2002 5:47:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks JaBBs for your comment.  
Date: 11/26/2002 9:58:00 AM  From Authorid: 61673    oh wow, this is such a sad poem. thanx for sharin it!  
Date: 11/26/2002 7:05:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks everyone for your comments.  
Date: 11/26/2002 10:19:00 PM  From Authorid: 56489    Sad poem, your a very talented writer, but how true this poem is. Aimless  
Date: 11/27/2002 7:56:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks Aimless for your comment:)  
Date: 11/27/2002 8:27:00 AM  From Authorid: 54441    this is a real good poem...with a very sad and true theme!thanks for sharing...HUGS,Bro  
Date: 11/27/2002 7:11:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks for your comments SIS!HUGs!  
Date: 12/7/2002 1:43:00 AM  From Authorid: 40881    Aww. JAak, that was so sad...  
Date: 12/7/2002 7:56:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks for your comment Daijha!  

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