'The Exceptional 'EXIT' "a crime-time story" #2 written by- tomevans

Act 2wo" THE EXCEPTIONAL EXIT:

Erase the plot lines to my stories that never find a way to a complete resolution. I could've found conclusions and endings, but my mind changes directions so often that if I lose interest in something that I'm committed to- it becomes an impossible task- to regain the core of the entire scenario that I work so very hard to create. I am wishy-washy if you may, but, I come here for two reasos. #1) friendship and encouragement/ #2) to be a creative and versaitile for USM- I love it here and it's so very important that this be a big part of my world. It's a vital piece of my life because it is like going to a world full of writers who share the same dreams. I love the people that I call friends here at UNSOLVEDMYSTERIESPUBLICATIONS. You have rescued me from saddness and yes, the lonliness that does overtake me at certain times, for whatever reasons- you just seem to understand me and the mood-swings that I journey through. Your words of friendship, love, and kindness- are sometimes the reason I come here, just so I can share these emotions with U:

We all share one thing, one thing of inevitability- death. It faces us all, and no matter what wrinkle creams you ladies indulge, no matter what kind of work-out regime, no matter how we add hair, no matter how many expensive shots we subject ourselves to- we are going to die. The methods of our demise aren't for us to know. The place and time- well that information is not accessible. We should live each day and we should help one another. We should protect one another. We should eliminate the fear that exist all around us, and we should take the time to become friends, then we should be the best friend we can be. We need to stop stealing from one another and start giving again............

It's like the Pink Floyd concept about the Wall. We as a society, have built a large wall around each of us. We did so, to protect us from the violence and evil. We did so, to not get involved, to not get beaten, to not get murdered- robbed, raped, car-jacked, and to avoid being conned by someone's game. We knew what to expect when dad got home in the 5:00 in the evenings. The putrid smell of 'wild-turkey' filled the house, and the loud screaming voices- that is what I would often fall asleep to. But still, we've all hidden behind the wall for way too long. It's made us insensitive to almost everything around us. It has de-humanized, sterilized, and un-compassionalized us. Instead of picking up a hitchhiker walking in the cold & freezing rain- we'd just as soon splash the walker, or throw trash out of the window at them..........................

While we live behind our big brick walls, the cable television and all of those newschannels that downplay our worst and most tragic current events. While we shuffle through the channels and play with all of our remote-controls- on the outside of the wall, our Government is lying, covering up, and setting us all up for a true to life "WORLD-WAR" and armegedeon. Maybe, because of all the changes that have accompanied the troubles of the world over the past 25 years- We've just blocked it out and there is no longer anything left to shock or surprise us, as a people. Add to all of this- violence on televis shows, news channels battling for the flavor of the day and then belittle the tragedies. As we hide behind our wall- our country is falling apart at the seams. We are falling prey to a new world order, a wicked Government, and a society that is getting more & more rebelious, more & more angry.....................

I believe people tear down their walls. I believe people care about our world and the directon for which it is headed. It's a job that can't be resolved with a neighborhoood, "crime-watch". It's a job that can't be repaired with tools. It's a job that by all indications- is too late to fix now...................

But can't we still try?

peace & love: tomevans/

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