Date: 12/16/2002 8:00:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
ah-ha, so it's the moon...well I knew it had to be something...I am in the same boat with you, Papa. I tell you, I like this though, very expressive. The words will find you again, til then...put a smile on your face :)  |
Date: 12/16/2002 8:32:00 PM
From Authorid: 55040
very good use of symbolism, great words, great expression. Its been a while since I've seen your work posted, it was a refreshing change of pace. keep writing man.  |
Date: 12/16/2002 8:32:00 PM
From Authorid: 4548
so desolate! i can feel you reaching out, through heart and mind. it's like that here, right now. bleak and cold. i miss the ocean so badly, it's actually breaking my heart. the smell, the sound, the feel of it, sliding over dry skin. all i have are memories to warm me through this cold, dark night...  |
Date: 12/16/2002 8:47:00 PM
From Authorid: 12341
Poignant poems speak to human mortality and the acceptance of it. Great poem Kronk!
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Date: 12/17/2002 7:16:00 AM
From Authorid: 31255
Great job Kronky, sorta reminds me of the poetry section... so quiet you could hear a pin drop.  |
Date: 12/17/2002 7:20:00 AM
From Authorid: 28946
The bleak period will be over soon and the warmth will be again. Good poem Kronk. Take Care and Merry Christmas!  |
Date: 12/17/2002 7:30:00 AM
From Authorid: 47538
Fabulous poem Kronk, as always.  |
Date: 12/17/2002 5:18:00 PM
From Authorid: 40199
great read. i enjoyed this a lot.  |
Date: 12/17/2002 10:00:00 PM
From Authorid: 56489
Glad to see you back Kronk, love your work! (Hugs)  |
Date: 12/19/2002 5:18:00 PM
From Authorid: 54444
I really enjoy coming to your post Kronk. No one else uses words quite the way you do. You can make one or two words carry as much information as a sentence or paragraph.  |
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