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*Betrayed* ~~~~ by : *~*MillenniumWitch*~* @~>~(watches as tears fall)

  Author:  11698  Category:(Poetry) Created:(1/28/2003 7:47:00 PM)
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*Betrayed*

U who has betrayed me
How could u do this to me?
How could u do this to a friend?
I don't understand

U who yelled at me about him
U who have said he is a loser
U who has done this to me
With who is but him!

U say u don't want to hurt me
But its too late
U have hurt me
In the worse possible way

I'm in shock cause of u
I can't understand why U'd
Wanna do me wrong
But u have

U have broken my heart
U have broken my trust
U have made me cry
U have hurt me

Why would u betray me?
In this way no less?
Sorry doesn't cut
What u have done
To me

And continue to do
U say u won't
Continue with him
If it hurts me

But what do i find
That u have made plans
With him again
Behind my back.

How could u do this
To a friend?!?!
Don't u care
About what u have done??!

U who has betrayed me
Don't u care!?
That i sit here crying
Alone in my room?

U have betrayed me
In the worse Possible way
How could u?

I would never do
What u have done.
Not for anything
Or anyone in this world!

But u have
U have hurt me
U have taken my heart
And ripped it apart

My heart is no more
It lies broken
On the ground

R u proud
Of what u have done
Done to a friend
Who felt u were
Like Family?

Watches as the tears
That fall down my face
Rain down on this
Leaving marks behind
For all time.

Marking this betrayal.

*~*Millennium Witch*~* )O(
(this is a long poem from me I know.. But i had to put my emotions down. Before I cracked.)

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Date: 1/28/2003 7:50:00 PM  From Authorid: 51241    um.........nice poem??? good poem, nice emotional release, maybe cut down in the repitions of certain phrases???? coo, 1  
Date: 1/28/2003 8:16:00 PM  From Authorid: 6558    this is definitely a great emotional release. (I know the repetition helps me feel like I've REALLY gotten it out.) I hope things work out. Sometimes your friends do things that hurt, and it can either end the friendship or merely put it on hold for a bit. That is up to you.  
Date: 1/29/2003 9:08:00 AM  From Authorid: 35160    i know exactly how u feel. i just went through a betrayel of my own last month. and its so hard 2 deal with. the worst pain i could ever imagine. 8^( huggs shay  
Date: 1/30/2003 6:34:00 AM  From Authorid: 44348    good poem but what i ahve to say is how would you feel if your freind went and was depressed and and cried all the time because she ahd a chancce at love but her freind made her stop because it was her ex look love is blind let your freind be happy with him it may hurt i've been through worse then you my freind slept with my girl but i know that they both are happy and thats all i care about yes i did want to kill him but i didn't and now they are happy and in love let them have love even if it hurts if you want to talk to me just im me or msg my aim name is trpvirus my yahoo is tripvirus i am usually on aim though so try that first  
Date: 12/2/2005 12:19:00 PM  From Authorid: 18928    good writing! you definetely get your point across.  

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