Date: 2/15/2003 7:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 36994
I took a peek at your site. I find it very sweet, and kind of you to start this. It must of been a great book, inspirational. :), By the way the site was great! best of luck to you@};-  |
Date: 2/15/2003 7:37:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 49101
Thank You! I am glad you enjoyed the site! The Red Tent was written by Anita Diamant in case you would like a GREAT Read! I am sure you would enjoy it!  |
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Date: 2/15/2003 7:39:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 49101
I just updated the page! |
Date: 2/15/2003 7:59:00 PM
From Authorid: 18516
Wonderful site MissC!!! I signed the guestbook..I think you'll be helping alot of women.  |
Date: 2/15/2003 8:00:00 PM
From Authorid: 47218
The design looks nice. It looks like a personal homepage, but I assume that that's what it's supposed to be, so it's okay. You probably want to run your type through a spell checker, since I noticed several typos-- "Womens" needs an apostrophe at the end, "menstral" should be "menstrual" in the third paragraph, "beatiful" should be "beautiful." "The" should be "they" and later on you have "adn" instead of "and." Also, I noticed several incomplete sentences in the third paragraph. FI, first sentence should read "The book begins in the settings of the Red Tent, or Menstrual Tent, where women experiencing their menstrual cycle were sent to remain until it passed." You might want to have someone else check over for grammar and spelling. Otherwise, intriguing idea. Good luck!  |
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Date: 2/15/2003 8:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 36994
I'm going to see if I can get my hands on that book :) |
Date: 2/15/2003 8:25:00 PM
From Authorid: 46486
Sounds like a good book. I do have a suggestion.. When you see the page it just goes down and down.. I think you should try to do something with the text to not make the text drag down so much, ya know? Other than that its great.  |
Date: 2/15/2003 10:26:00 PM
From Authorid: 7952
I had a quick look at your website and it looked nice. A few suggestions.. #1, The text size. I think your text size should be a little bigger. Perhaps it is my monitor, but the text was a little small. #2, The background. I loved the background, i thought it was very pretty. But i was just thinking that maybe it could be centered? the design looks as if its supposed to border the text and not used in a 'wallpaper' type fashion. #3, Alignment. I think your text could have been aligned a little nicer, maybe centered? #4, Menus. Like Fallin Angel said, i think that for your page to be a little more convienient (you would be surprised at how many people would be annoyed to just scroll down!) You could put a Menu bar on the side. It would make it look a little more professional. Like you could have Buttons on the Menu saying things like: "About Us" "Aims" "Contact Me" and "Links" . But apart from that, it looks very nice :)good luck with it!  |
Date: 2/16/2003 4:10:00 AM
From Authorid: 59418
I think what you're doing is a VERY VERY good idea. Please tell us when there are any updates:) metal princess  |
