Date: 7/10/2003 3:59:00 PM
From Authorid: 57222
Lovely, keep writing! :)
~*~*Sarah*~*~ AKA CheeseGoddess  |
Date: 7/10/2003 4:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 61901
Great poem! Hey, I can relate... Once I was working on job in the middle of the woods, when we would break for lunch... the noise of machines would stop and we could hear the wind, the birds ect. Great Post! This one really hit home to me. :)  |
Date: 7/10/2003 5:32:00 PM
From Authorid: 56359
This was really good Rainbow Angel. I really enjoyed it. Great work!-screen_writer-  |
Date: 7/10/2003 8:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 37809
Hey Rainbow Angel, I think that you did a wonderful job on this poem. You have a great talent when it comes to writing, and I am glad to be able to read your work. Thanks for sharing it.  |
Date: 7/10/2003 10:04:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 13546
I would like to thank you all for your comments!!!! :) They always mean something to me!  |
Date: 7/11/2003 5:57:00 PM
From Authorid: 62226
forever?
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Date: 7/11/2003 6:06:00 PM
From Authorid: 28363
hi *Carissa* I love the way you phrase ;)  |
Date: 7/26/2003 7:01:00 AM
From Authorid: 22992
I am speechless, this was great. I am going to have to look at all of your poems. The way you contrasted a life between mchanical society, and original nature was dne superbly. This was very very good and reminedme of the poem "All watched over by machies of loving grace:, that is a poem where machines and humans live together in harmony. Great great poem;)  |
Date: 9/13/2003 9:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Loved this one, lady :) City life...country life. Inside/outside..the city and us. Thanks for the words, Rainbow Angel. Write on :)  |
