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Take Over Me (my first song!)....by: fantasy/reality

  Author:  57105  Category:(Poetry) Created:(7/11/2003 2:33:00 PM)
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Heres a quick little story! One of my friends is in a band, and she for some reason showed her bandmembers some of my poetry, and they really liked it. So, they asked me to write a song for them! Now, this is the first actual song i've ever written and I didn't really know a lot about the structure of a song, but i did my best. My friend showed it to them, and they liked it, yay lol. I hope you all like it too :)


verse 1:
I use to know you
Now you're someone else to me
You just got up and left
Now you expect me to wait and see
You expect me to freeze my life
Freeze my life for you

chorus:
I won't let you control my life today
and I don't care what you have to say
cause im packin my bags
and now its time for me to go away

verse 2:
The water's ice cold
And I'm covered up to my neck
In this flood you caused me
You didn't know that I would break
You didn't know that I would hate
you for pushing me out your door

Chorus

verse 3:
You thought that I would stay for you
Thought I wouldn't be able to leave
thought I wouldn't be such a fool
And that I'd stop and wait
Stop and let you take over me

bridge:
And when you start to fall
I won't be there
I'm not going to catch you again

Chorus

No I'm not givin in
No I'm not
No I won't let you take over me

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Date: 7/11/2003 3:14:00 PM  From Authorid: 37150    AW my God! This is VERY well written!!! It's one of the top best ones! Gr8 and awesome words 4 ur first song...wow...gee i wish i could hear how it goes!!!!! :-D Thanks 4 sharing it. *bookmarks* hehe Ur sis,  
Date: 7/11/2003 7:20:00 PM  From Authorid: 56446    for your first song, its really good. I wish I could write songs... but nnnoooo, I cant! lol o im done. this was really cool  
Date: 7/11/2003 7:25:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 57105    Thank you both so much! I'm glad you liked it! -fantasy/reality  
Date: 7/11/2003 9:50:00 PM  From Authorid: 49959    lol, it's awesome everyone in the band loves it babe. hehe, John is setting up beats and we could thank you enough. We'll pay ya back f/r, love you lots! Sokie
Date: 7/11/2003 9:54:00 PM  From Authorid: 11054    Hey very good writing... too bad I can't ask you to write some songs for me ... or else I would you are awesome but if you decide you would want to I'm making a demo and if you are interested I would give you full credit for all of your work... HUgs and Love  

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