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Let Me Breathe......by: fantasy/reality

  Author:  57105  Category:(Poetry) Created:(7/13/2003 8:57:00 PM)
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This is probably the longest poem I've ever written, hehe. I had just had a huge argument with one of my friends before I wrote this, which is what inspired it. I never, ever have arguments with my friends, so it really forced out some emotion. I hope you all like it.


You have no idea what you do to me
My ears are bleeding from all your screams
I bury my face in my hands and I try to drown it out
But you just won't stop
You go on and on
And I scream back
Emotions fueled in this pointless fight you fired up
Look at what you did
This isn't how a friend is suppose to be
My eyes are burning and my hands shake
I pull at my hair and try to drown it all out
But you just won't stop
You go on and on
And I scream back
I cry and scream and hope you'll just leave
I can't deal with this
I have done nothing
To provoke your anger but you just don't care
As long as you take it out on someone, right?
Anyone will be fine for you
I have done nothing to deserve this
Why am I still here?
I should have left long ago
But I got swept up in the calm before the storm
And got caught unprepared
I'm short of breath and I cry out
You just cover my mouth
You only hear what you want to hear
Now I can't breathe
You strangle me with a new expression on your face
I try to escape
But you just grip tighter
And you won't let me go
You won't leave me alone
Why can't you just go
Let me be alone
Stop killing me
Let me breathe..
Why won't you let me breathe?
Please
Let me breathe..
Please release me
Don't kill me anymore
I just want to breathe

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Date: 7/13/2003 9:02:00 PM  From Authorid: 37150    I'm 1st 2 view and review hehe....wow these r powerful words. Perfect length, flow and wording. I totally get this & how u feel. I really luvd the line: But I got swept up in the calm before the storm. Another amazingly gr8 poem written. T2ul & take care. Thanks 4 sharing,
  
Date: 7/13/2003 9:16:00 PM  From Authorid: 36994    beautiful :(! sniff  
Date: 7/13/2003 9:16:00 PM  From Authorid: 36994    oh my! that was great !!!  
Date: 7/13/2003 9:17:00 PM  From Authorid: 57222    Wow... I know how you feel... sadly... thanks for sharing! *hugs bunches*

~*~*Sarah*~*~ AKA CheeseGoddess
  
Date: 7/13/2003 9:39:00 PM  From Authorid: 56446    heart breaking that a fight made you write this. but its very good. man, i just posted something on here, and i was feeling really good about it untill i read this, and well im kinda paranoide about my post. stop being better than me!! LOL  
Date: 7/14/2003 8:57:00 PM  From Authorid: 49959    great poem...of course it was written by you. I sorry they made you feel this way...I sure can relate homie. Love you tons ~~Sokie
Date: 7/17/2003 7:16:00 PM  From Authorid: 62222    what a great poem.<regretfulhalo>  
Date: 7/19/2003 7:53:00 AM  From Authorid: 56840    I feel you.. It's hard.. Flowing, emotion-packed poem, I liked it. Keep writing..  
Date: 7/19/2003 7:53:00 AM  From Authorid: 56840    *bookmark*  

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