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Date: 8/6/2003 10:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 62100
Beautiful..I like how you wrote it with emphasis on the colors..  |
Date: 8/7/2003 1:08:00 AM
From Authorid: 56410
Beautiful description. Very colorful, but sentences and paragraphs need a bit of fixing up. (Sorry; I know no one likes to hear their work criticized like that, but I think its good for a writer to hear if they want to improve) Otherwise, great job!  |
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Date: 8/7/2003 9:19:00 AM
From Authorid: 16164
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeek, my daughters name is serena.. it gave me a picture i dont wanna see yet......seriously i like the story it is very nice.....and pretty....  |
| Date: 8/7/2003 5:10:00 PM From Authorid: 62270 Hmmm. Did they walk into the ocean. Very complete and very good for being so short |
Date: 8/7/2003 9:04:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62220
Hahaha no but thanx for all your comments...I know it needs help but it was spur of the moment!  |
Date: 8/7/2003 10:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 57054
wow... that's great. i liked it alot... thanks for posting!!!  |
Date: 8/8/2003 7:43:00 AM
From Authorid: 39957
Oh wow. That was very beautiful.  |
Date: 8/8/2003 11:23:00 PM
From Authorid: 56359
It was short, yet very good, and very beautiful. Excellent job!-screen_writer-  |
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Date: 8/17/2003 6:51:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62220
[blushes] thanx |
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