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The Basis of a Revolution

  Author:  38919  Category:(Poetry) Created:(9/20/2003 2:00:00 PM)
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Childhood is a sea of clay

It begins serenely; still, but very much alive

The clay sits and lives its own life, bothering no one, living in blissful ignorance

Until the sculptors discover it

However, these are not normal sculptors

Most sculptors are artists who carry chisels

These sculptors are overlords armed with whips

They look at the clay and frown saying "why is this clay lying here like mud?"

And so they decide to make the clay into statues

They crack their whips at the clay for twelve long years

They whip with numbers and criterion

They whip to crack through the mind and bleed the clay of its will

With each flogging the clay statues bare a closer resemblance to their makers

But not every child is made of clay

There is the jagged rock; ugly, hated, and unflinching

The jagged rock does not fear the whip

He scowls at and mocks the sculptors, so that every sculptor comes to whip the rock

The rock is beaten with the whips of criterion and public disapproval

But the whips fray and snap on the rock; and the sculptors lose their whips

With no weapons to subdue it, the clay falls out of its shape and melts into an ocean

The sculptors fight to preserve their creations but they are only drowned in the fury of the ocean

After the sculptors have been smashed and their works diminished, the sea of clay resumes

And all is serene again

The clay celebrates its utopia and enjoys the beauty and peace of their new world

But what of the rock?

The rock is a special sort, it does not know serenity

The whips did not destroy the rock but they did provoke rebellion

And so the rock was affected

He saw the effect that the whips had on his piers

In anticipation, he sold his love of life for strength to fight his oppressors

And so in the new world order, the rock had no more enemies, no more cause for rebellion

He had won his war

And he was content to die

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Date: 9/20/2003 2:02:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 38919    never thought id write a poem lol and i prolly never will again. my friend told me it was fun. it was ok, but i prefer prose ;-)  
Date: 9/20/2003 7:35:00 PM  From Authorid: 33286    twas pretty cool, keep writing  
Date: 9/20/2003 7:36:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 38919    ty  

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