Date: 9/20/2003 7:39:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
wicked. i like it...  |
Date: 9/20/2003 7:39:00 PM
From Authorid: 38919
that was cool. i must say i am a little bit confused though, so was this from an actual experience? what motivated you to write this?  |
Date: 9/20/2003 7:47:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
thanks Cyborg, I am glad you enjoyed, no, not an actual experience, I am a writer who likes different angles. it was inspired in part by something a friend said, and then the rest just by my own head.  |
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Date: 9/20/2003 7:48:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
hi Bethann, glad you enjoyed it. thank you |
Date: 9/20/2003 8:34:00 PM
From Authorid: 44850
ah, the beauty of magic ... some rules, my friend, make sure that you control the knife and that its not just playing tricks on the magician ... and becareful what you are able to get to succumb through will, sometimes the will can break through walls put up for a REASON. :p great words, sir.  |
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Date: 9/20/2003 8:39:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
hi S.P., I don't think I could ever visit a hypnotist, something about the control issue, lol, glad you enjoyed this man, thanks |
Date: 9/21/2003 5:50:00 AM
From Authorid: 56840
Oooh, way cool poem. :D I can just see things happening.. Keep writing..  |
Date: 9/21/2003 6:27:00 AM
From Authorid: 57116
strangely beautiful to me, this poem.....I must be ill  |
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Date: 9/21/2003 7:52:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
thank you LB, a little bit of a darker side, glad you enjoyed |
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Date: 9/21/2003 7:53:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
lol, hi Renee, I think I am ;) glad you enjoyed, thank you |
Date: 9/21/2003 11:50:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
I love it HAck! But you know...I am unusually fond of all sharp things....and you are definitely sharp my friend! <RegretfulHalo>  |
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Date: 9/21/2003 12:33:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
lmao, thanks RH, so glad you enjoyed |
Date: 9/21/2003 4:40:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
"First battles are usually fought in the minds of the opponents." (Tai Chi knife) How cool, this poem. Hypnotic indeed, Hack. Thanks and Write on....  |
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Date: 9/21/2003 4:45:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
hi Kronk, thanks man, makes sense to me... :) glad you enjoyed this. |
Date: 2/21/2005 10:30:00 PM
From Authorid: 53016
I immediately flashed on a persuasive lothario who wields his charms in order to capture his prey. It happens all the time, lol. I can see his sinister vampire like grin, enjoying the game. That's the image that was brought to me. Kat.  |
