Date: 9/21/2003 12:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
ahh, sweet... and Shiva will grind your bones to powder, dancing the cycles of existance. I sense more power underneath this poem than on the surface... great poem :D  |
Date: 9/21/2003 12:51:00 PM
From Authorid: 59418
That was a really good poem...and i know EXACTLY what you mean about being crushed in little ways..*hugs* sorry you are going through this :( I'm bookmarking this, you can msg me if u need to talk!  |
Date: 9/21/2003 1:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 42792
Dust can be stronger anyway! Cool one, RH.  |
Date: 9/21/2003 4:43:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Awesome words, RegretfulHalo :) Your lament carries far, my friend. Do "they" hear? I wonder? Thanks for that feeling and the great read, lady. Write on....  |
Date: 9/23/2003 9:05:00 AM
From Authorid: 42568
I like the comments Hack and Kronk have made. I must say I agree to them both! To add my own words... I believe that it is healthy (in a way) to be "dust." That may not make too much sense but I am just grateful to be the type of person that learns and lives better from experience and exposure to life itself than to be walking above everything. The power people have on us. If only they would realize... maybe they wouldn't be so cruel. Great poetry here!  |
Date: 9/23/2003 1:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Yeah.. The little things.. Amazing poem! I am so glad to have come upon your work. :) Keep writing..  |
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