Date: 9/21/2003 12:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 52866
Wow...this is VERY good, almost haunting. Excellent descriptions and ending. I like!  |
Date: 9/21/2003 12:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
suhweet, destroy that which mocks you, usually a male trait. ;) another oldie I trust, dang, you could always write  |
Date: 9/22/2003 3:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 57116
ouch...alot of deep-held feelings in this one...and that's what poetry is all about...thanks for posting...I enjoyed the read  |
Date: 9/23/2003 8:59:00 AM
From Authorid: 42568
I think rarely anyone grow up, becoming what is expected of them... or at least reach their full potential, only the raise their own kids and expect of them what they couldn't achieve in life and it keeps going on and on... there is no stop! I love this poem primarily because I can relate so well to it. Rage, self-hate... this poem is real.  |
Date: 9/23/2003 1:07:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Wow, this is good. And I'm not just saying it because it's good, I'm saying it because I enjoyed reading it.. Very well-written. :) Keep writing..  |
Date: 9/25/2003 7:50:00 PM
From Authorid: 36994
I am quite fond of your poetry regretful halo, you never let me down, always give me a good read. Thank you so much for sharing your talent. Looking forward to more of your work:)  |
Date: 10/5/2003 8:00:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Kikkin' poetry, lady. I had a vision in my head. Excellant poetry, RegretfulHalo..Write on...  |
62222 Category:(Poetry) Created:(9/21/2003 12:49:00 PM)