Date: 9/22/2003 4:07:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
hi Renee, :D this is really cool, it reminds me of the tribal hunters, and how the villiage relied on the hunt. great poem  |
Date: 9/22/2003 8:44:00 PM
From Authorid: 34487
Wow, you are talented. The structure of this poem reads very smoothly. I love poetry with a bit of ryhme and a lot of meaning. It pulled me in.... :)  |
Date: 9/22/2003 8:47:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 57116
how wonderful to hear from you....thanks for your thoughtful comments  |
Date: 9/24/2003 12:16:00 AM
From Authorid: 21435
There is such an intensity about hunting. I've always loved most eveything about the sport. The prep, the trip, the stalk, the shot...Then the sadness, knowing that something that once lived, is now gone. Excellant poetry, Renee. Write on....  |
Date: 9/24/2003 2:53:00 AM
From Authorid: 28946
This poem reminds me of one of my favorite songs, "Leaving On A Jet Plane" and moved me to tears thinking about having to part with a loved one. Another beautiful poem, Renee.  |
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Date: 9/24/2003 2:38:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 57116
Oh, gee, guys. You are so sweet. |
