Date: 9/22/2003 5:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 45630
Not bad. It gets the message across. Maybe you should convey your passion for the work of the heavy man from Korn by displaying your feelings to his work. It would work alot stronger than just two word lines. I hope this doesn't sound too harsh. I see potential in this one.  |
Date: 9/22/2003 5:10:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 46486
I can't post my favorite one it hits way to close to me I won't even let VG look at it..  |
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Date: 9/22/2003 5:10:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 46486
I wrote it at 7am and all I could think of (even though I wanted MUCH more into this than what I had..) I just drew a blank and wrote what came to my mind even though it lacked in every aspect mostly.. not one of my faves though since I knew I could do better.. |
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Date: 9/22/2003 5:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 45630
Too easy. I know what you mean though. I have one on here which is aimed the Kurt Cobain called "When the tallest tree falls". |
Date: 9/22/2003 5:59:00 PM
From Authorid: 50193
To be quite blunt, I hate it; especially the ninth line down.  |
Date: 11/9/2003 11:13:00 AM
From Authorid: 1799
lol@VG. well of course you would hate that line.. i don't know though.. its very to the point, which is cool. i don't know who ur speaking of, so i'm lost..lol  |
