Date: 9/22/2003 5:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 45630
awesome poem. Bethann deserves all the praise she gets.  |
Date: 9/22/2003 7:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 50193
I wrote out a reply, but before I posted it I went to read the other reply(s). My reply was what Kurtvedder said, word-for-word.  |
Date: 9/22/2003 10:46:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
I don't need to dress up like a clown to look like one, lol. This poem gave me goose bumps Crusty. Wow... really captures how magical life can be like if you just imagine it that way. I really needed to read something like this tonight because my life has been far from magical lately. And thank you Kurtvedder and VG... that means a lot to me. :)  |
Date: 9/23/2003 1:55:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Author only: Pretty much yeah...your guess is on the money  |
Date: 9/23/2003 2:16:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Some of you will perhaps notice that I have re-worked the poem. I like it better this way and this is how it will be published. thanks for viewing.  |
Date: 9/23/2003 9:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 60992
Awww..This is such a great poem!!..I bookmarked it of course!!..It made me remind me of my childhood..
Love Ya
*canuck Hugs*
-des  |
Date: 9/23/2003 9:57:00 PM
From Authorid: 56489
LOL, MOA at some of your lines, you have a knack for writing that just reels me in, (winks) (hugs).  |
Date: 9/23/2003 11:27:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thanks everyone for your reviews. Love all, Lonny  |
Date: 9/24/2003 12:11:00 AM
From Authorid: 21435
Wonderful words, Man of Asgard. Whenever I sit with the children, I can feel the wonder..again. Loved it. Write on....  |
Date: 9/24/2003 2:35:00 PM
From Authorid: 57116
this is adorable!!!!  |
Date: 9/24/2003 5:34:00 PM
From Authorid: 60018
Aww Grampoo :) I love this. I've been behind on reading some of your stuff so maybe if I get a chance I'll try again. I just remembered what I've been missing. Great one :)  |
Date: 9/25/2003 2:55:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
Grampoo??? lol  |
Date: 9/26/2003 1:36:00 PM
From Authorid: 60018
Lol! I like it Beth... don't you ;)  |
Date: 9/26/2003 7:51:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Sounds like a brand of shampoo, but I don't have any hair LOL  |