Date: 9/22/2003 8:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 45630
I love this poem. Im not going to comment on Sam becuase I don't know wether she is a real person or metaphor. but this is good honest work.  |
Date: 9/22/2003 8:57:00 PM
From Authorid: 36994
Nice way of putting the character Sam, and using her as a kind of, lets see...representation of how you feel? I'll say that:) type:P Very well written, keep up the great poetry:)  |
Date: 9/22/2003 9:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 37809
You know that I am a big fan of your poetry Bethann, and that I greatly enjoy reading your poems. This poem is no exception and I thought it was excellent.  |
Date: 9/22/2003 9:25:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Very interesting! I enjoyed the read, Bethann. :) Please keep writing..  |
Date: 9/23/2003 5:06:00 AM
From Authorid: 42945
hi sweetie, glad to see you are writing again!!!! this is an excellent description of your true feelings about yourself ...its great writing hun....hugs "Z"  |
Date: 9/23/2003 7:23:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
"She can feel why I keep living in a circle"...that's a very powerful line, in fact it is quite a powerful poem. A lament to a part of yourself that you love and hate in equal amounts, and it loves and hates you back. Very Interesting.<RegretfulHalo>
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Date: 9/23/2003 8:22:00 AM
From Authorid: 33286
lol, RH jumped on the same line I was going to talk about. this is a cool poem BethAnn, I liked where it took me.  |
Date: 9/23/2003 9:36:00 AM
From Authorid: 53427
This was awesome Bethann! I'm bookmarking this one:)  |
Date: 9/24/2003 12:05:00 AM
From Authorid: 21435
Insightful..My own is called "Jim" and he's been with me since those carefree days on the bayou, when we whiled away the hours on the old rope swing, watching the nutria and alligator trails at sunset. I still love him. Excellant poetry, Bethann. You made me think...and that is good. Write on.....  |
Date: 9/25/2003 4:33:00 PM
From Authorid: 60018
I like it a lot Beth. You may think it's weird but I can totally relate to it. :)  |
Date: 9/26/2003 7:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 54444
so tell me do i say good jub Beth or good job Sam LOL. this is really awesome...do I sense another Page has turned?  |
Date: 9/27/2003 12:04:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42568
I think so Londis... :) Thank you everyone!  |
