Date: 9/23/2003 10:09:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
This reminds me of someone who is paranoid scitzophrenic trying to talk sense to themself. Like that person's rational breaking through for one moment, for one second they are sane and then nothing...back into madness again. If you have ever read "The Sandman" comic books by Neil Gaiman, you will know this poem belongs to the Lady Delirium, she who was once Delight. Very Interesting Poem Hack, my friend.....interesting indeed...<RegretfulHalo>  |
Date: 9/23/2003 10:25:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
hi RH, thanks, I am trying to learn to take the audience more into horror while staying real, on the thought that my favorite Stephen King stories have nothing to do with the supernatural, and those are the ones I find the scariest...  |
Date: 9/23/2003 3:07:00 PM
From Authorid: 33925
Wow, very good Hack..I read this and immediately thought of a young girl fighting for her life, and trying to stay focused through the pain she was enduring...I actually could feel her pain.  |
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Date: 9/23/2003 3:53:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
hi LL, thanks so much, mwa ha ha ha... glad you enjoyed |
Date: 9/23/2003 4:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 28363
I like colours  |
Date: 9/23/2003 4:15:00 PM
From Authorid: 57116
"...pigment of your imagination..."...lovely play on words...another great poem :-)  |
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Date: 9/23/2003 4:56:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
DONNO... dude, long time no see man, thanks so much. |
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Date: 9/23/2003 4:57:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 33286
hi Renee, lol, you hit the one thought that started the poem. glad you enjoyed, thank you |
Date: 9/24/2003 7:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Oooooh... that line, dragging icy fingers down your spine.. That made me shiver! :P Creepy, vivid poem, Hack! Keep writing..  |
Date: 5/30/2008 12:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 24003
I really liked this!  |
