Date: 11/20/2003 9:44:00 PM
From Authorid: 13546
*takes a breath in as the air comes back into my lungs* wow.. breath taking poetry my dear friend.. you have captured the other side in life so vividly. I really like this piece my friend.. you always take me away and show me something new with your words... keep writing always..  |
Date: 11/21/2003 5:52:00 AM
From Authorid: 46320
Those last lines say it all. This is a really intense poem. It reminds me of a veteran that I know he will tell any story about the places he was stationed, but nothing of the people. Be Good...  |
Date: 11/21/2003 6:10:00 AM
From Authorid: 56489
This reminded me of the homeless on the streets of NYC, leaves me wondering where's their children, & what happenened that they all of a sudden have to be there. Nice writing Kronk!  |
Date: 11/21/2003 6:40:00 AM
From Authorid: 27534
I am sure that man's inhumanity to man can cause very intense sadness. And that predators wherever they may reside love the cover of darkness to do their preying.  |
Date: 11/21/2003 6:56:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
Yeah..nobody's young anymore..and even kids have seen what would make grown men weep...and then there is the helpless knowledge that we have brought in all upon ourselves...<RegretfulHalo>  |
Date: 11/21/2003 4:12:00 PM
From Authorid: 42945
great words here Kronk....as per usual my friend...I think we have all seen this at one time or another...and I love that song by Phil Collins...hugs hun  |
Date: 11/25/2003 6:52:00 AM
From Authorid: 42568
What stories I'm sure you could tell, Kronk. "...The elements of feeling and of thought, And sanctifying, by such discipline Both pain and fear, until we recognize A grandeur in the beatings of the heart." --William Wordsworth  |
Date: 11/30/2003 8:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
"Between the idea/And the reality/Between the motion/And the act/Falls the shadow/For Thine Is The Kindgom" -- T.S. Eliot .. For some odd reason this poem reminded me of that bit from him.. Moving words, you never cease to amaze me with the depth of meaning you can pull from such simple letters.. Keep writing..  |
Date: 12/8/2003 2:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 57116
pain....is usually self-inflicted...and usually felt...alone.....thank you for writing, and responding....giving me something to look forward to....  |
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