Date: 3/21/2004 12:16:00 PM
From Authorid: 59266
very deep and emotional...good piece...  |
Date: 3/21/2004 12:57:00 PM
From Authorid: 62506
Beautiful and sad.It touches my heart to read it.Good job,Banner!:)(((HUGGZ)))~Don  |
Date: 3/21/2004 1:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 49101
This was an excellent piece Banner. Bravo  |
Date: 3/21/2004 1:16:00 PM
From Authorid: 8024
goodbyes always open new doors if you let them ... I learned this over the years ..
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Date: 3/21/2004 1:23:00 PM
From Authorid: 20750
This is a emotional poem, seems like I felt each word! Awesome! I always have loved your writing! Now how about some fiction? Hehe  |
Date: 3/21/2004 1:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 3263
:(  |
Date: 3/21/2004 1:59:00 PM
From Authorid: 55386
Love it Banner. But as some saying goes...I know I'm gonna get this wrong, when one door closes, another opens, but we pay so much attention to the closed, we never see the opened. *hugs* If this is how you feel, I'm here to talk to, and I love your poem. Great job!  |
Date: 3/21/2004 2:50:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 1432
Thanks guys :)..  |
Date: 3/21/2004 3:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 22992
I like this poem.. its sort of a roller coaster of feeling. At first its very loving and then later on i sense a bit of anger. It is very deep and i could really sense what you were feeling. The only part that didnt "flow" with me was the fourth paragraph, but when i read it a second and third time it sounded better and better. Good poem  |
Date: 3/21/2004 4:16:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
If I wasn't such a "rock," this one would probably jerk a few tears...Oh Lordy!..*wink* Loved the poem, Banner. You can make me "feel" it. Write on...:)  |
Date: 3/28/2004 6:38:00 PM
From Authorid: 14780
Oh gosh, this almost brought tears....  |
