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| Date: 4/3/2004 6:19:00 PM From Authorid: 62527 Its awesome, but as a fellow poet i would recomend that you deepen this one...add flavor, and some more depth, esily done by turning it more into a story...but its nice the way it is, i quick thought in poetic form |
Date: 4/3/2004 8:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 45273
Great poem i can relate to it so much. Keep it up!![]() |
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