Date: 7/28/2004 5:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 53558
I like you poem a lot. Keep them coming..(",).  |
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Date: 7/28/2004 7:11:00 PM ( Admin-HM )
Good poem, thank you for sharing it with us. :) |
Date: 7/28/2004 10:24:00 PM
From Authorid: 62813
Very good Poem...keep sharin !!!
Your USM Friend,
Slickchick :->  |
Date: 7/28/2004 10:34:00 PM
From Authorid: 52612
this is one of the few great outstanding poems i've read here, and yes keep them coming..  |
Date: 7/28/2004 11:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 62423
I like this... Keep it up. :)  |
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Date: 7/28/2004 11:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 50091
That was a very nice poem, lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing. |
Date: 7/29/2004 7:48:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62424
wow...I thought I would only get 2 or three replies...thanks guys..glad you liked it :)  |
Date: 7/29/2004 1:18:00 PM
From Authorid: 27534
Very well done author....had me looking at the sky today....thanks for the read.  |
Date: 8/24/2004 3:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 23101
I especially liked this poem Jaded Salvation. I think it is one of your best. My favorite part was the last two lines: "Im being torn out of heaven as Im being torn away from you." That is the perfect ending to this poem.. Thanks for writing. *hugs*  |
