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Date: 12/2/1999 7:23:00 PM
Make it longer and contain more info! But other wise it was great. |
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Date: 12/19/1999 9:03:00 AM
From Authorid: 2222
Yeah I agree with the above person. You could make it longer that way it would be more interesting to read. But good story anyway.
By the way, you dont have to wait till you grow up to tell people about this you can tell people now.
Your story is very interesting though.
-sugar |
Date: 2/12/2000 1:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 4292
cool needs more info but its great...t6  |
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Date: 4/10/2000 1:29:00 PM
From Authorid: 7206
YOU SHOULD HAVE ADDED MORE DETAIL BUT IT WAS GOOD |
Date: 4/21/2000 1:21:00 PM
From Authorid: 7574
i did a report on the bermuda triangle once. all those missing ships, planes,people,etc. scary.
-amy-  |
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Date: 5/16/2000 12:27:00 PM
no |
Date: 8/1/2000 8:38:00 AM
From Authorid: 10657
you should make the story longer. Talk about
the things that have disappeared. There is another
one similar to the Bermuda but, it is not widely
reported it is in the great lakes and called the
Devil's triangle  |
Date: 8/2/2000 7:10:00 AM
From Authorid: 12190
you should include more information, there is so much to say about the triangle...very interesting stuff indeed..  |
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Date: 10/6/2000 8:12:00 AM
I am Adam the Swot And I love To Learn A Lot |
Date: 10/28/2001 5:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 16376
you should have added a little more detail. but interesting anyways  |
