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Date: 10/8/1999 2:13:00 PM
it was okay but not scarey and bloody and gross enough. |
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Date: 10/8/1999 2:43:00 PM
needs to have more detail, and be more descriptive |
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Date: 10/26/1999 4:35:00 PM
I is thinkin that tis person is a lien hwo bouts you
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Date: 11/12/1999 9:07:00 AM
I think that the story would have been good if it flowed. Also, you should check your grammer. |
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Date: 2/9/2000 9:59:00 AM
Needs more info and excitement. Not very involved. |
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Date: 2/17/2000 1:38:00 AM
From Authorid: 1169
I dont know, it depends....is this something that actually happened to you, or something flowing out of your mind? ~Z |
Date: 3/1/2000 10:25:00 PM
From Authorid: 3649
this spirit is trying to communicate with you. I know its hard to understand what it is trying to say but try. Spirits start to get rather annoyed when they are misundrestood  |
Date: 3/11/2000 11:47:00 AM
From Authorid: 3901
scary  |
Date: 3/30/2000 11:40:00 PM
From Authorid: 5229
I think it was pretty good.  |
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Date: 8/4/2000 9:53:00 PM
i believe |
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Date: 10/29/2000 12:44:00 PM
misspelled alot of words |
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Date: 12/8/2000 1:09:00 AM
THINGS HAVE HAPPEND TO ME TO WHEN IM ALONE IN MY HOUSE>
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Date: 1/5/2001 7:05:00 AM
i thought it was quite rubbish. Never read anything like it. |